Intro paragraph

     What would life be like in a slum?  A slum is a squalid and overcrowded urban street or district inhabited by very poor people.  The problem with slums are that there is no enforced law therefor increased crime.  Slums are not very healthy environment.  There is hardly any space to get around and is very disorganized.  Life is hard in a slum.

Outline

I.         Introduction

A.     A life that is not enforced with law and not good health and very crowded is not a place anyone would want to live in.

B.     A slum is a squalid and overcrowded urban street or district inhabited by very poor people

C.  The problem with slums are that there is no enforced law therefor increased crime.  Slums are not very healthy environment.  There is hardly any space to get around and is very disorganized.  

D.    Life is hard in a slum.

II.         Defendable Point #1

A.     what is hard about life in slum.

B.     Supporting evidence

                                      I.     Quote

                                     II.     Paraphrase

C.     Explanation

D.    There is no enforced law.

III.         Defendable Point #2

A.     The problems there is living in a environment with no enforced law.

B.     Supporting evidence

                                      I.     Quote

                                     II.     Paraphrase

C.     Explanation

D.    The troubles of living in a over crowded area.

IV.         Defendable Point #3

A.     How its like living in a over crowded area.

B.     Supporting evidence

                                      I.     Quote

                                     II.     Paraphrase

C.     Explanation

D.  Over all life is hard. 

V.         Conclusion

A.     Hook

B.     Restate thesis

C.  Life in a slum is hard